i cant say i like the way you produced it, but the rhodes/elpiano/synth riffs are nice..
are those samples or it that you playing?
try to "tone down" the drums a bit
damn those 808 drums are annoying! You REALLY need to equalize and mix it better. Add some BASE, perhaps a baseline....
jaevla pikktryne, faen ikkje kom inn paa mine greier og skriv spansk for eg fatte faen kje driten. Kim e egentlig du te og doemma meg eller fortella meg ein dritt?!? Du suge maks, og burde holda kjeften paa deg din dret-onge. so bare fortsett og rid pikken te alle "vennene" dine her inne saa komme du nok longt ska du se..
turn down the flute
turn down the flute, add a BASELINE, and replavce the crappy 808 samples and this beat has potential...
Poetic Reven wrote:
"if yur gonna do hip hop I'm the king round here"
bow down man, cuz he's got this place on lockdown... He be makin the hottest beats since... EVER!
So dont try to step up, cause reven is tha Shit!
BITCH PLEASE!!!!!!!!!!! give me a f***** break...
the drums are cool, but the rest is not.
and there is no baseline!!!
wrote down some things as i listened to it:
its outta sync!
the melody is boring
drums are annoying
= This is crap
and cajete : you find samples on wax and not on the net you bitch
well, what can i say...
The beat was horrible, and you cant rap..
Dam, what can I say? Fuck off fag! :)
I dont know much about music , but if reven says its hot imma go for that! He's like the godfather of the audio portal!!
Sounds like something from the 36th Chamber. Very very Wu-Tang... Cool Track, but not very original, pretty basic
But the vocals are not perfectly in sync with the track... And also work on the mix... Try to make te vocals blend more into the track. EQ EQ EQ EQ EQ!!! crank up the track!!
classic hiphop molestation
wtf? you can't do this to a classic hiphop song!!!
you just tore apart the whole song (and i mean this in a bad way)!!
The accapella is not even in sync with your remix beat or whatever...
remove the quiet storm vocals and make it a song of your own..!!!!!
yeah I know, dis was my first time doing dis so it's not as good but heck I learned alot doing dis, I actually did make dis my own song but it didnt fit in here so I put my first try at it, But thanks for the review ^_^
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